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well well well Posted at 8:45 pm on June 27, 2008
When you said that you grew up,
I knew immediately...
That what you really did,
was you'd grown out of me.

Because you're there in tough times,
To help me pull through.
I help you, too, but good times
Never happen with you...

Because you said you'd text me later,
But later never came!

And you left my best friend hoping,
and you left him waiting in the rain.

And, girl, you're a heartbreaker,
But you've just got no shame!

And I guess I could still be jealous,
but I guess that would be vain.

Because you say they hate you!
And say they berate you!
They all wanna date you!
Girl, nobody hates you!

There was everything, then little.
The occasional 'what's up'.
And you're changing right in front of me.
Yeah, I guess you grew up.

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BikerTeen Posted at 1:39 am on June 28, 2008
meh i don't like
AnacinCross Posted at 8:57 pm on June 27, 2008
Using stuff like texting in poetry/music will likely only make sense to our generation. It kind of shortens the life of it.
Your decision, but it's generally better to not use those kind of references.
ninjakittymaster Posted at 8:53 pm on June 27, 2008
sounds like my boyfriend if you change the genders up :/
Xhiddenartist17X Posted at 8:48 pm on June 27, 2008
it's eh
citigurl3 Posted at 8:48 pm on June 27, 2008
thats sad... very good though, good ryhme!
honeybee3333 Posted at 8:47 pm on June 27, 2008
coolness.
wat it about?
mcrfool Posted at 8:47 pm on June 27, 2008
it's ok..
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