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camillelong 26 Posted at 10:40 pm on July 11, 2008
ill give you a minute
ill give you an hour
ill give you a day

Just ask it
ill give it like a flower
All you have to do is say

what it is you want
no matter what
i swear ill get it

for you never taunt
and ive give you everything but
you only asked for a minute

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desireelovesyouu Posted at 10:50 pm on July 11, 2008
Nice :)


+3

IheartNY Posted at 10:41 pm on July 11, 2008
ok
ellex4xlove Posted at 10:41 pm on July 11, 2008
i really like the ending
nice job :]
JuggaletteBaby Posted at 10:40 pm on July 11, 2008
its not THAT bad.
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