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August Rush Posted at 10:52 pm on July 30, 2008
Hi, i have written a poem about an abusive father, i have not got abusive parnets although after reading 'a child called it' i realised that there is alot of abuse happening around the world to young people.
I hope that people can read this poem and get strengh from the last verse. hopefully it will also help people to understand what shit some people have to go through.
As i say please let me know what you think and if you have any stories to tell i would like to hear them.

I wrote this about 4 years ago so please excuse the grammatical shortfalls lol.

Early submission, I'm on the floor,
Going under, not strong enough to endure,  
Another day of torture,
Another year of pain,
I cannot take these beatings again,
Blood on my face, running down my chin,
Oh god dad how did this all begin,
I'm only 10 dad, not strong enough to stand,

Tell me to survive dad, pull my head up high,
The knife across my throat dad, my life's drifting by,
Love me dad, I am your son,
Remember dad the innocent one,  
Don't beat me with your fist again,
I can't take it dad, please not today,
Oh god I wish you could feel the same,
Just let me go dad, stop this pain,

To know what it is to be a puppet dad,
In your sick game, a helpless young child,
Please dad not another beating today,  
Against the wall dad, down on the floor,
Across the face and on my knees,
You do to me dad as you please,
I will be good dad, I promise you that,
Do anything you say dad, just please don't attack,

But one day dad, you must learn,
I'm not a puppet; it's not your turn,
I am here now standing tall,
And have you up against the wall,
Not one more day, will you succeed,
In holding me down and making me bleed,
It's my turn now, you have to pay,
So fuck of dad, stay far away!

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ASIANRACER32 Posted at 10:56 pm on July 30, 2008
oh yeah nice poem by the way
ASIANRACER32 Posted at 10:55 pm on July 30, 2008
Quote: from necronomicon servant at 1:53 am on July 31, 2008

Gothic...or emo..
you'll understand it once you read the book its a true story i've all 3 novels the third one wasn't my fried slice of gold because it just talked about him meeting oprah and stuff
Total Destruction Posted at 10:53 pm on July 30, 2008
Gothic...or emo..
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