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rainfall Posted at 12:40 am on Aug. 12, 2008
I would like you to tell me what you think. Give me your opinion.

My heart is like the ocean sea,
Deep, dark, and blue,
You have to reach deep to find my soul,
The one that of which has a hole.

You took that away
All I have to say,
Is how could you,
What did I ever do

Dark from the shadow inside,
That hovers around and lies,
It's stuck in me,
I don't want it to be.

You took that away
All I have to say,
Is how could you,
What did I ever do

Inside I am blue,
I hurt because of you,
You were never there and I felt neglected,
All I wanted was to be protected.

Don't you see,
How much pain you've caused me,

My heart is like the ocean waves,
Deep, dark, blue, and shaken.

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marissac Posted at 12:53 am on Aug. 12, 2008
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marissac Posted at 12:51 am on Aug. 12, 2008
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rokkin1 Posted at 12:49 am on Aug. 12, 2008
meh 5.5/10
nickiiROCKETSHIP Posted at 12:48 am on Aug. 12, 2008
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rainfall Posted at 12:43 am on Aug. 12, 2008
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Anonymous Posted at 12:42 am on Aug. 12, 2008
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