Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Will someone offer me some serious help? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post iBritt Posted at 5:39 pm on Aug. 20, 2008 I'm writing a short story, and I don't really know what direction it's in, but would someone be willing to read it, and tell me what you think of it so far?  The part that I've written - it's not the beginning, it's going to be somewhere in the middle. Any takers?  I would really appreciate it.

Replies ErnestoTheTrippyOne Posted at 5:46 pm on Aug. 20, 2008 Hell yeah, I love reading unfinished crap and helping with it! (not sarcasm) Fouad Posted at 5:42 pm on Aug. 20, 2008 yeah why not xemoxisxlovesxcryx Posted at 5:39 pm on Aug. 20, 2008 i will if you want im a beta on fanfiction All 3 previous replies displayed.