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ello paulie xx Posted at 9:18 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
This poem I wrote a long time ago...


why is it that the world cannot shed the truth

the media's sending subliminals to adults and the youth

the next day you find.

something that haunts your mind.

someone is lost, someone is missing

of your memories you are reminiscing  

the tradgey quite apparent  

when you realize it's your parent

gone, alone, nowhere to be found

in the streets, in an alley, on the ground

you wait for the day they finally come

but you've waited too long and have become numb

your memories slipping out of your head

as emptiness creeps in instead

emotionless as a wall

you feel so small

dried up tears upon your face

nothing to prove in their trace

but the wet mascara on your chin

that doesnt hide how you feel within

the lost soul that has gone away

will never live to see another day

but all this time you were mislead

and realized you wound up dead

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dont fall asleep Posted at 6:00 am on Aug. 29, 2008
i love that poem its ace and it speaks to you
sunflower915 Posted at 10:59 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
cool
it could like totaly be a rap
xdark bluex Posted at 9:23 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
me emo. =]
Permious Posted at 9:22 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
Quote: from ello paulie xx at 9:20 pm on Aug. 28, 2008

Quote: from Permious at 12:19 am on Aug. 29, 2008

i wanna meet you IRL and help you be normal and happy :(

I am an outrageously happy person. That was a LONG time ago. Just out of... whim I guess.

oh cool

ello paulie xx Posted at 9:20 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
Quote: from Permious at 12:19 am on Aug. 29, 2008

i wanna meet you IRL and help you be  normal and happy :(

I am an outrageously happy person. That was a LONG time ago. Just out of... whim I guess.
LittleItaly Posted at 9:20 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
wow, that's really good
Sheebobee Posted at 9:19 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
ha
pretty emo

Permious Posted at 9:19 pm on Aug. 28, 2008
i wanna meet you IRL and help you be  normal and happy :(
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