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chargrilledwoppa Posted at 1:36 am on Oct. 1, 2008
Would this constitute a poem?

I have always disliked using rhyming techniques because i think it greatly restricts by its nature, the uniqueness of a poem. Thats why I hate 'Rime of the Ancient Mariner' [if any of you know it]

Let me know what you think of the poem, does it make you feel a certain way, what does it mean to you?

Slightest touch, senses linger,
Breathing soft, faint air flow,
Silent nature, feeling nurture,
Great intense, teasing woe,
Work it soft, press it harder,
Make it grow from head to toe,
Until at last, when peace you find,
You go and go and go.

Most poems take me ages to think about, and to work at, this took me about a minute, so I feel like I have cheated.

Thanks

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Clara Bell Posted at 1:37 am on Oct. 1, 2008
I noticed a lot of caesuras.