Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Tell me what you think so far. Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Poeticpunker Posted at 7:39 am on Oct. 13, 2008 It is not done but I'd like to know what you all think of it so far... Biting his lips, he combats himself "Should I or shouldn't I?" runs again and again His hand hovers, his eyes stare Still, he can't bring himself to words, to action Her attention would be his bliss or his hell Plagued with every "what if" he can dream of She keeps turning to see no one She keeps feeling nothing But she knows there is someone there Anxiety is her constant companion Anticipation is her constant muse She can feel him there but still nothing Wars are in both of them Stirring emotions, turbulent thoughts Both of their stomachs turn Damned desire, innocent stalking Him, what will happen? Her, when will it happen?

Replies EliEe Posted at 6:04 am on Oct. 14, 2008 Keep it going! Jaems Posted at 8:04 am on Oct. 13, 2008 I'm liking it so far. Dont Notice Me Posted at 7:41 am on Oct. 13, 2008 Quote: from Poeticpunker at 9:41 am on Oct. 13, 2008 Quote: from dont notice me at 10:40 am on Oct. 13, 2008 yeeeeaaaaaa i'm biased because i hate poetry so it's lame. Then why would you bother with this topic? poooinnntttssssssssss BleedingSteelWings Posted at 7:41 am on Oct. 13, 2008 very good. Poeticpunker Posted at 7:41 am on Oct. 13, 2008 Quote: from dont notice me at 10:40 am on Oct. 13, 2008 yeeeeaaaaaa i'm biased because i hate poetry so it's lame. Then why would you bother with this topic? Dont Notice Me Posted at 7:40 am on Oct. 13, 2008 yeeeeaaaaaa i'm biased because i hate poetry so it's lame. All 6 previous replies displayed.