Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic I love you Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post MusicalSuicide17 Posted at 10:49 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Idk. Its not too good but w/e. I'm sitting alone inside myself/Wondering if the cards I'm dealt/Are worth playing in this game/The one where you get inside my head/And twist around everything I've said/The words you speak are they true?/Is there really a me and you?/Cuz I can't understand/Why?/Would you have to lie/Diretctly to my heart/Is this how it starts?/You love me today/Tomorrow what will you say?/I'm drawing blanks and can't describe/The way you make me feel inside/I will break into pieces just for you/Put me back together soon/Or am I puzzled just like you?/I feel broken/And I'm chokin on these three words/Do you know what I mean?/I'm screaming I love you/I love you so

Replies emmy350 Posted at 5:23 pm on Oct. 26, 2008 Aww, that's really sweet and a tad bit sad. Napster the Hacker Posted at 1:44 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:33 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 2:01 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:25 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'       good one though   It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence.     ow, never knew that.well never did poetry :P   Haha, I don't do it either. I just assumed it was common knowledge.   Haha, I guess you do learn something new everyday. (: hehe yeah ofc :P Jadien Posted at 11:03 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 2:01 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:25 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'   good one though    It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence.  ow, never knew that.well never did poetry :P Haha, I don't do it either. I just assumed it was common knowledge. Haha, I guess you do learn something new everyday. (: Napster the Hacker Posted at 11:01 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:25 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'    good one though It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence. ow, never knew that.well never did poetry :P   bloodhunter Posted at 11:01 am on Oct. 23, 2008 That's really good I love it superchris4000 Posted at 10:56 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Really good. It would also sound good as a song. lol MusicalSuicide17 Posted at 10:56 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 1:55 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'    good one though It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence. Yup   Jadien Posted at 10:55 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/' good one though It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence. Eos Posted at 10:55 am on Oct. 23, 2008 I love you too. Napster the Hacker Posted at 10:53 am on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/' good one though MusicalSuicide17 Posted at 10:52 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 1:51 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Well, it is passionate. Thanks snowcone200 Posted at 10:52 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Would sound better as a song then poem. need more ryhme for a normal love poem and more deepness? but as a song it good Jadien Posted at 10:51 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Well, it is passionate. All 13 previous replies displayed.