Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic I think it would be great to receive some feedback on my story. Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post B E K Posted at 11:19 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 It's called 'A Visible Spectrum'. I have the first two chapters on my deviantART. cannonbonk.deviantart.com It's the only two things I have up so far, if you don't understand, then it's 'Elliott 1:1" and "Elliott 1:2" PLEASE leave some feedback.

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