Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic a random burst of inspiration Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post ocdbabe Posted at 1:41 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Despite the sudden burst of rain, Kodi continued to press on the accelerator.  No one else was on the road, not this road anyway.  She rolled down the window and let the water spray onto her face and into her car.  But she didn't mind; she needed to feel something just to know that she was alive.  And as the rain poured down harder and stronger, she pressed the gas pedal to the floor.   She let her eyes close, testing her knowledge of the road.  And back at home in her mind, she could hear them talking about how sad it was and how expensive she would be.

Replies ocdbabe Posted at 2:06 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Quote: from noahjk at 1:52 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Quote: from ocdbabe at 1:49 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Quote: from noahjk at 1:48 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 No one else was on the road, not this road anyway   should be ; not ,   shouldn't start a sentence with and    Meh i tend to ignore the rules when i'm writing =p    I was told that a good writer ignores the rules and is able to make their own. But you're right about the semicolon. thanks =] yeah but a published writer follows the rules. I'm not published..yet. =] I have a book in the works though. My editor likes my style. Light Assassin Posted at 1:52 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Quote: from ocdbabe at 1:49 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Quote: from noahjk at 1:48 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 No one else was on the road, not this road anyway    should be ; not ,    shouldn't start a sentence with and Meh i tend to ignore the rules when i'm writing =p I was told that a good writer ignores the rules and is able to make their own. But you're right about the semicolon. thanks =] yeah but a published writer follows the rules. RANDOMER56 Posted at 1:51 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 its gud:) ocdbabe Posted at 1:49 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Quote: from noahjk at 1:48 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 No one else was on the road, not this road anyway should be ; not , shouldn't start a sentence with and Meh i tend to ignore the rules when i'm writing =p I was told that a good writer ignores the rules and is able to make their own. But you're right about the semicolon. thanks =] HuffleHaire Posted at 1:49 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Neat. Light Assassin Posted at 1:48 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 No one else was on the road, not this road anyway should be ; not , shouldn't start a sentence with and All 6 previous replies displayed.