Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic this song, or poem or something. Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Anonymous Posted at 8:30 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 All your life you knew Things that were expected of you Tasks that you were born to complete And human nature's wants and needs. But now I see And now I know Dall me cynical I prefer term "insightful" Because I see We cant all be Perfect. Always did your best at everything that came your way For "Failure, is not an option" theyd say You were taught this from such a young age And never thought to question it. But now I see And now I know Dall me cynical I prefer term "insightful" Because I see We cant all be Perfect. Perfect, oh, perfect We all want to be perfect But hows it possible for everyone to Be the best? Reality, it hurts some times, But you'll just have to learn to cope with the fact That your never gonna get what you wanted. Because perfects, not so perfect If getting there, hurts this much. And now I know Dall me cynical I prefer term "insightful" Because I see We cant all be Perfect.

Replies VonGuy1 Posted at 8:33 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 i like it it pretty good carracer Posted at 8:33 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 As a poem it lacks pattern and creativity. In my opinion of course. Not sure about as a song. The same rules don't apply as in a poem. Either way though, I just think its a shallow idea. It lacks depth and thought. TBMP Posted at 8:31 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 its good points but its not fantastically presented more of a vent than a poem really All 3 previous replies displayed.