Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Will this get an A??? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Flikted001 Posted at 10:26 am on Dec. 20, 2008 I'm supposed to be writing a poem for school {again}, and I need to know if this will work. We're supposed to write something on one of four things: Teen sexuality A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect} OR Lost loved ones.. I wrote one on 9/11.. Do you think it'll get me a passing grade? (It also can't be longer than 15 lines) Remember it Flying fire Remember this Death for hire Remember all The loved ones gone Remember that We must move on Remember that It changes nothing Remember that The end is coming Not my best work.. but I think its good enough. ...Opinions?

Replies Flikted001 Posted at 9:22 pm on Dec. 21, 2008 haha. i got a 97% on it. w00t GeneCosta Posted at 8:30 am on Dec. 21, 2008 Depends on what grade you're in. This looks like a typical teenage poem, no offense. Flikted001 Posted at 10:46 am on Dec. 20, 2008 okay... thanks. LoveLikeBlaqkWinter Posted at 10:37 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Its gewd ^^ ^^. XxXx. Lei Posted at 10:33 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Quote: from look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things:   Teen sexuality   A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect}   OR   Lost loved ones.. "   Epic Fail. Aha i thought that but then i couldn't be bothered to process the fact that it was a fail....nicely done. Kitty Kiska Posted at 10:29 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Last line doesent fit in that well with the rhyme of the rest of the poem. Total Destruction Posted at 10:29 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Quote: from look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things:   Teen sexuality   A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect}   OR   Lost loved ones.. "   Epic Fail. ^ this Flikted001 Posted at 10:28 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Quote: from look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things:   Teen sexuality   A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect}   OR   Lost loved ones.. "   Epic Fail. I don't remember  the other one. Something to do with adolensense. <--- Excuse mispellings please.. ArtFreak Posted at 10:28 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Definitely good enough. I guess it depends how hey mark your work, but it shows a lot of language techniques and a bit of imagery the whole idea is very clever. I like it (: look over here Posted at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things: Teen sexuality A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect} OR Lost loved ones.. " Epic Fail. All 10 previous replies displayed.