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Original Post
Anonymous
Posted at 5:38 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
She makes me smile very bashfully.
Her hair is like the sun,
warm, yellow and abstract,
a testament to her original garden,
a well manicured plot at heaven's gate,
where i found her, in passing god's estate.
a ray of mind, a petal on her face.
one of may, a great invisible embrace,
to be known by the silent, to whom is given right,
of a lullaby. this song be heard by, and loved by
a person of vision, to whom she'll show colors unseen.
all is made in a meditation. a moment of her choice.
a pool of light pours from her eyes to her feet.
this blessing washing all the dirt
of travels that cannot be spoken to ears,
for none can hear a song of air and shadow
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ShellS
Posted at 5:42 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
Thats beautiful. I like the way you worded that. Good Job. I think if that if you truly feel that way about her then ask her out.
DawningMidnight
Posted at 5:40 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
aw
babecakes
Posted at 5:40 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
awwwwhhh.
twerp
Posted at 5:39 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
ok
Zetsuai
Posted at 5:39 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
Aww, did you write that? That's really sweet.
feels good
Posted at 5:39 pm on Dec. 28, 2008
ask her out
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