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amber1991 Posted at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
I made a promise to you
that I intend to keep
no matter how I struggle
I can't reach defeat
you mean too much to me
to throw it all away
I can't say goodbye
I can't say it today
I have to keep breathing
talking to you
this can't be the end
we can't really be through
I won't let you go
I'll hold on tight
I won't give up
not without a fight

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Moatilliata Posted at 10:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008
elementary but acceptable
EmmitWinchell Posted at 10:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008
well worded I like it.
smalltowngirl9 Posted at 10:54 am on Dec. 30, 2008
good jobb
Miss Vanity Posted at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Cute
sosupkthnx Posted at 10:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
you dont reach defeat.....so no, its not good
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