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maxmiller1991 Posted at 5:02 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
when theres lightning  it always brings me down
cause its free and I see it that its me
whos lost and never found
I cry for magic I feel it dancing in the light
but it was cold I lost my hold
to the shadows of the night
theres no sign of the morning coming
you've been left on your own


So what do you think? thats what ive written so far

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matto Posted at 6:27 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
that was fucking good.  you sound like one possibly aquainted with the night
vllybllstar Posted at 5:03 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
deep
Craziie Posted at 5:03 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
I tihnk the poemsz really good actually.. send me some !
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