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matto Posted at 6:29 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
 on a bus
us standing side by side,
 touched at the Waist,
a long ride went by.

On a hot day,
 in search of air to breathe:
The un-noticed man
 opens the window.

packed in tight,
 closer than ever, yet bored -
here we are, trying not to be.
 It's my stop. I'll myself pull the cord.

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addicted to girls Posted at 11:02 pm on Jan. 12, 2009

i liked it
Lohrbas Posted at 6:31 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
You're a cool kid.

That's pretty cool that you're willing to go so that your significant other can move on.

Craziie Posted at 6:31 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
I like it:)
ird13 Posted at 6:31 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
Hm...Interesting...
sosupkthnx Posted at 6:30 pm on Jan. 9, 2009
was this about twizzlers?
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