Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic poems tell me what you think honestly and take this seriously Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post cadetjones2011 Posted at 8:14 pm on April 26, 2008 "Our love" We may fight And stay clear out of each other's sight But no matter what we say or do You will always be the light Of my heart That causes me to say our love is a work of art   "Your heart" Your heart is like a delicate flower Or like a strong tower It can be broken Or payed by a token Of love Which can soar higher than any dove   "Love" A bell is just a bell A book is just a book   A song is just a song But love is a feeling that Never gets old And will never make you cold Love protects And may be complex But just have trust And remember to never lust If you do you will cause your lover's heart to bust "Words of love" To proclaim that I love him Is so easy to say But I will tell him in my own special way The way he says my name Lets me know he is not playing games He says the most kind and loving words and each one has their own touch And for that he deserves so much He will forever be in my heart He will never leave my mind And one day our hearts will intertwine   "true love" I wait for you day by day Anxious to see your loving face Knowing when I do my heart will race And never have the same pace It will skip a beat Everytime we cross the street As you lift me to my feet I see just why I chose you because you are sweet   You will always be here in my mind Until the day you come back any to find Throughout all of the years that have passed Our love has become stronger And we will be able to love eachother longer these are some poems i wrote today honestly tell me what you think and no answers about going to poetry.com or something like that i really want to know what others think of my poetry before i submit it and if you like my poems please do not steal them if i find out you did that will be unpleasant just ask me over personal messerenger if you can ue some of the same words thanks

Replies cadetjones2011 Posted at 8:14 pm on April 26, 2008 "Our love" We may fight And stay clear out of each other's sight But no matter what we say or do You will always be the light Of my heart That causes me to say our love is a work of art   "Your heart" Your heart is like a delicate flower Or like a strong tower It can be broken Or payed by a token Of love Which can soar higher than any dove   "Love" A bell is just a bell A book is just a book   A song is just a song But love is a feeling that Never gets old And will never make you cold Love protects And may be complex But just have trust And remember to never lust If you do you will cause your lover's heart to bust "Words of love" To proclaim that I love him Is so easy to say But I will tell him in my own special way The way he says my name Lets me know he is not playing games He says the most kind and loving words and each one has their own touch And for that he deserves so much He will forever be in my heart He will never leave my mind And one day our hearts will intertwine   "true love" I wait for you day by day Anxious to see your loving face Knowing when I do my heart will race And never have the same pace It will skip a beat Everytime we cross the street As you lift me to my feet I see just why I chose you because you are sweet   You will always be here in my mind Until the day you come back any to find Throughout all of the years that have passed Our love has become stronger And we will be able to love eachother longer these are some poems i wrote today honestly tell me what you think and no answers about going to poetry.com or something like that i really want to know what others think of my poetry before i submit it and if you like my poems please do not steal them if i find out you did that will be unpleasant just ask me over personal messerenger if you can ue some of the same words thanks All 3 previous replies displayed.