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Lenab796 Posted at 2:14 pm on Nov. 11, 2008
it's called, "What's Wrong?" I wrote it because it was too hard for me to tell anyone what was bothering me so I just wrote it on paper. Here's how it should go:

What's wrong?
God used to be my life.
I used to be myself.
Now those things are
Gone, on an invisible
Shelf.

What's wrong?
I love God, but I
Sometimes doubt
His love for me.
 
What's wong?
Everytime I'm
Around or seem
To be surrounded by
Happy people, the
More my happiness
Fades away.

What's wrong?
Sometimes,when I'm
Upset,and don't know
What to do,I say to
God,"Why did you have to go?"

       

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Behemoth Posted at 2:21 pm on Nov. 11, 2008
That's really well written
babecakes Posted at 2:17 pm on Nov. 11, 2008
awe...get over yourself, and cheer up, life's not always good. damn. u don't need anybody feeling sorry for yourself, and btw, burn that fucking poem. =).
jessikita89 Posted at 2:16 pm on Nov. 11, 2008
u kno i hope i got the message of this but u should b a happy person i used to b exactly lyk that but i learned to b happy and i learned to over come it.
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