Adding Reply Topic check out my website Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post August Rush Posted at 9:01 am on June 19, 2009 Any criticisms so far? It's just a holding page, but I need it to look professional because i'm going to be approaching companies for free products, so I need them to take it seriously. Positive and negative criticisms welcome, but please make sure their constructive. http://tinyurl.com/kv23d5

Replies anonomouse Posted at 1:05 am on June 29, 2009 Looks good so far. There are a few things that you could improve (this is just my taste, so you can do whatever you want): Do something more creative with the logo. The grunge-style font doesn't really stand out and it is... typical The badge in the lower right looks like standard web 2.0. That's not bad, it's just like a cliche now I really like how you remembered to add a favicon! And if you programmed it in an IDE (like dreamweaver) you did not leave any mark of that in the html and the code is very clean and tidy. Chasey Posted at 9:05 am on June 19, 2009 Naice Hi Jack Posted at 9:02 am on June 19, 2009 I liek. All 3 previous replies displayed.