Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic need you to proofread my site/webcomic... Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post lordofallyou Posted at 5:56 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Ok, I made a webcomic, and I need someone to please, please proofread the grammar for me. Despite what it says on the front page, the "about us" link works. If you see a mistake, please message me or post it, you will suddenly become cool. Don't proofread the comics themselves, because I am not going to really fix images.  Also the styles don't carry over to the comics themselves yet, so don't panic about that. nerdtablecomics.com

Replies techiejunk Posted at 4:11 am on Feb. 29, 2008 Holy shit that sucked. None of your links work, they all go back to your host. You posted the same news twice... and, there is a shitty design... DJ Josh Posted at 6:17 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Has potential, keep it up. BREAKBOY Posted at 6:08 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Quote: from lordofallyou at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 never saw that comic, lol,  but wanna post a link? I'll change the layout Don't worry, it's no C&H ripoff. BREAKBOY Posted at 6:07 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Quote: from Breakboy at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Is also Russian, less is known about her then is about C.H.A.R. Then should be than. Actually, I'd also make it say, "Less is known about her than is known about C.H.A.R." lordofallyou Posted at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Oh, and thanks, I'll fix that lordofallyou Posted at 6:03 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 never saw that comic, lol,  but wanna post a link? I'll change the layout BREAKBOY Posted at 6:02 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Insane, random, knows karate, also is known for killing people, mainly Tony. Not 100% if what you said is gramatically correct, but I believe "is" and "also" should be switched around. Ancient Rights Posted at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 It looks like you're trying to copy Cyanide & Happiness. BREAKBOY Posted at 6:00 pm on Feb. 28, 2008 Is also Russian, less is known about her then is about C.H.A.R. Then should be than. All 9 previous replies displayed.