Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic I wrote lyrics Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post The Artful Dodger Posted at 9:16 pm on Sep. 3, 2008 Changed worlds From the first to the third And back again, confused I put my thoughts into words Experience in life; all brought into words Sought freedom and I found it Now I'm lost, like a bird Flying free, over the sea Soaring over new places Never knowing where I'm going Or which direction I'm facing Those people on the ground They take it for granted That support beneath their feet Of all the things they were granted I perch on a mountain looking down Into valleys with men Searching for the future And see nothing resembling an end Does your loyalty lie In yourself or your family Or the very men who instigate The hate-based insanity? __________________ Yeah; my boys took me to a real studio for the first time today (the owner is a producer name Gee Slang). I wrote it in the morning during class and just spat. We got a beat and everything. That's my verse I set it off. 3 hours  of recording, mxin an blunts. Wanted the whole thing for myself (so I could write more). I'll post it for people to pick apart when its completely mixed down but what do u think of the lyrics? Does it come off as deep? Thats how its supposed to. An a lil' bit obscure/abstract so alot's open to interpretation.

Replies ludlight Posted at 10:35 am on Sep. 5, 2008 not bad Frubeling Posted at 9:38 am on Sep. 5, 2008 Quote: from The Artful Dodger at 12:10 am on Sep. 5, 2008 Quote: from Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008 Sung in what style? Rapped. As for who I'm biting flow wise (I have a feeling you don't listen to rap. please prove me wrong); NaS, Pac, Joe Budden...course I'm not near as nice as any of those guys. I know who they are, but your'e right, I dont listen to rap The Artful Dodger Posted at 4:10 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 Quote: from Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008 Sung in what style? Rapped. As for who I'm biting flow wise (I have a feeling you don't listen to rap. please prove me wrong); NaS, Pac, Joe Budden...course I'm not near as nice as any of those guys.   Frubeling Posted at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008 Sung in what style? calvin47383 Posted at 9:18 pm on Sep. 3, 2008 decent... All 5 previous replies displayed.