Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic english help. Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post victoria6689 Posted at 8:25 am on Nov. 27, 2008 "This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments I see represented sensations." i need someone make that sentence right, because i feel there's something wrong in it, but i can't see what

Replies Colleen35 Posted at 12:39 am on Nov. 30, 2008 This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments, I see represented sensations It's perfectly fine with the the comma there.  Stamp of approval. Shaknbake Posted at 12:07 am on Nov. 30, 2008 Quote: from victoria6689 at 8:25 am on Nov. 27, 2008 "This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments I see represented sensations." i need someone make that sentence right, because i feel there's something wrong in it, but i can't see what "This space is excellent," "I find this space to be excellent," "This space seems excellent," "More than (just) moments(Comma) I see sensations represented." I strongly recommend the 'just' in the second sentence, but it isn't absolutely necessary. The comma after 'moments' indicates the proper rhythm which gives that sentence feeling and makes it clear that the sentence is actually correct. GeneCosta Posted at 11:09 am on Nov. 27, 2008 Although both sentences are theoretically correct, you probably want to reword the phrases. The second sentence is way too confusing, and I'm still not sure if I get its intent: "This space seems excellent to me. I see represented sensations more than (I see) moments." silverrose42 Posted at 8:59 am on Nov. 27, 2008 This space seems excellent to me. I see represented sensations than many moments. Kjanhot Posted at 8:52 am on Nov. 27, 2008 "This space seems excellent to me. There are many moments that I see represented sensations." BodomChick Posted at 8:31 am on Nov. 27, 2008 it seems to me that this space is excellent? easy Posted at 8:29 am on Nov. 27, 2008 This space is excellent to me.I see represented sensations more than moments. squashed banana Posted at 8:29 am on Nov. 27, 2008 i dont understand what the second part means. this space seemed excellent to me Al Legator Posted at 8:27 am on Nov. 27, 2008 It sounds pretty vague in it's intent. What is the context? What are you trying to get across? All 9 previous replies displayed.