Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Your opinion LW? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post roxann Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 It's a quote from The Killers song "Human". I do have it written at the bottom of the page but my scanner cut it off. What do you think though? http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l227/bouvier-luver/dancer.jpg

Replies dovie Posted at 8:08 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Am I supposed to critique the drawing? Okay, well, her legs need a bit more shape, to give some life to it. The leg that is holding all the body weight looks like a cylinder. Is that supposed to be a dress or a skirt? You should just be more detailed with it. The proportions are incorrect. Finger Paint Posted at 9:57 pm on Dec. 30, 2008 It's nice, but she looks a little funny. :) Work hard and you'll get better. big mac Posted at 7:18 pm on Dec. 30, 2008 Quote: from roxann at 12:49 pm on Dec. 30, 2008 Now i never said my cursive was any good. I actually dont write in it very often....so ya know looks good to me. And my art teacher said it was in proportion. Your art teacher has no backbone. Or no art education/background. Also; I would like your art teacher's e-mail so I can tell them why they should retire. It is NOT in proportion. EarthEmpire Posted at 11:12 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Quote: from roxann at 10:49 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Now i never said my cursive was any good. I actually dont write in it very often....so ya know looks good to me. And my art teacher said it was in proportion. Your art teacher is trying to spare your feelings. If you can't take criticism, don't ask for opinions. roxann Posted at 9:49 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Now i never said my cursive was any good. I actually dont write in it very often....so ya know looks good to me. And my art teacher said it was in proportion. big mac Posted at 3:21 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 The words are not straight. The handling of the cursive is poor. your form, proportion and rendering all need work. EarthEmpire Posted at 2:45 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 Quote: from roxann at 5:42 am on Dec. 29, 2008 I know the whole thing is slanted. Blame the scanner. Its cursive writing. Well, actually, your person is quite vertical, but the letters start to slant. In fact, the third line is more slanted than the first. Secondly, I use cursive for all my uni notes and my "n"s don't look like "m"s. Check your "an" in "human" and compare it with the "an" in "dancers". That vertical in the "human" "n" is what is killing your entire argument. getforless Posted at 5:39 am on Dec. 29, 2008 good work roxann Posted at 4:42 am on Dec. 29, 2008 I know the whole thing is slanted. Blame the scanner. Its cursive writing. EarthEmpire Posted at 10:05 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Her head is disproportional to her body. The legs are kinda.. meaty. The feet have an unnatural shape to them. Also, it says "humam", to me anyways. And you might want to make straight lines when you do the writing. Hey, you asked for my opinion. Leelyy Posted at 7:17 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Haha. Miss Vanity Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Cute Magnifique Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Pretty :) All 13 previous replies displayed.