Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Who's good at proofreading? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]Black American Dude[/m] at 2:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008[quote]also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on"[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Black American Dude Posted at 2:56 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence" that because good cannot exist without evil God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good. should there be a "," after evil and before God? as in In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence" that because good cannot exist without evil, God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good.

Replies EndLess LoVe Posted at 3:03 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 If it were me It would go as; In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise which suggests that because good cannot exist without evil, God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good, as written in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence". Black American Dude Posted at 3:00 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 is this better? In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise: because good cannot exist without evil God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good, in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence." omgnowayyy Posted at 3:00 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 the entire statement kind of looks a mess to me, but the comma should be there. Spastic Fantastic Posted at 2:59 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Post from this position was omitted due to content violations iBritt Posted at 2:59 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Quote: from Black American Dude at 5:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on" The whole "that" was a bit confusing.  It's a little bump in the sentence. But I think your comma is in the right place. hateitandloveit Posted at 2:58 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Quote: from iinsurgent at 5:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Who's** lol qft Black American Dude Posted at 2:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on" iinsurgent Posted at 2:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Who's** All 8 previous replies displayed.