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Topic Live Life, We Learn
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heyitnat Posted at 2:07 pm on Dec. 14, 2008
For the life of mine, Cruelty shall not take thou place

When time comes, surprises will follow

Absences may seek hope, and dawns may learn faith

Arises the sun, as we wake; see the beautiful colors the world holds for us

Everyday thou soul loves and hurts

When time breathes, we must learn

To accept surprises and praise upon thy core

Where one meets another, We Adore

(What do you guys think? Honest answers, Please)

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guitargogo90 Posted at 2:08 pm on Dec. 14, 2008
good, not great (you wanted honesty)