Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Creepy poem that I wrote Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from Anonymous at 5:21 pm on June 25, 2008[quote]Quote: from [m]porcelain cinderella[/m] at 5:20 pm on June 25, 2008[quote]It's pretty good for the most part but you rhyme at the end of you lines and then you stop so it doesn't really flow.[/quote] that was intentional to show the increased stress and smooth flow with his mind[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Anonymous Posted at 5:16 pm on June 25, 2008 .

Replies Anonymous Posted at 5:21 pm on June 25, 2008 Quote: from porcelain cinderella at 5:20 pm on June 25, 2008 It's pretty good for the most part but you rhyme at the end of you lines and then you stop so it doesn't really flow. that was intentional to show the increased stress and smooth flow with his mind porcelain cinderella Posted at 5:20 pm on June 25, 2008 It's pretty good for the most part but you rhyme at the end of you lines and then you stop so it doesn't really flow. All 2 previous replies displayed.