Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic A story to be told like... Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]SpM[/m] at 10:09 am on June 26, 2008[quote]It turns out she was adopted at birth and the man is her biological father?[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post HangEmHigh Posted at 10:08 am on June 26, 2008 I'm writing a story over the summer and it's about this 16 year old who falls in love with a guy who's 40 (I know I know   ) and she's already got a boyfriend. But she keeps her affair with this 40 year old secret and... I don't know what else to do with it!! Anyone have any good ideas for a twist or anything please?

Replies ThaFish Posted at 10:20 am on June 26, 2008 Wow that happened to me (I mean when I was 16 my gf went off with a 40-year-old and kept it a secret). If you want a real-life twist, the forty-year-old pretends to be moving to Dubai in order to try and get rid of the girl, but the girl's sister's friend is the daughter of this woman that the guy is having an "affair" with, and so the girl finds out and eveything falls apart. Guy blames girl for ruining relationship, girl's mum finds out, meets man down the pub and punches him in the face. Man subsequently ruins his relationhip with woman, get banned from pub for violent behaviour, puches his one remaining friend (his ex-wife who he was staying with) and is never seen or heard from again. Everyone wins. Except him. X ffion x Posted at 10:11 am on June 26, 2008 Quote: from SpM at 10:09 am on June 26, 2008 It turns out she was adopted at birth and the man is her biological father? That's a twist..Haaa, it's funny. :) xoxo HangEmHigh Posted at 10:10 am on June 26, 2008 Haha nice =) SpM Posted at 10:09 am on June 26, 2008 It turns out she was adopted at birth and the man is her biological father? All 4 previous replies displayed.