Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic another one of my poems. Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]carracer[/m] at 1:08 pm on July 2, 2008[quote]Its good i think it would be better as a not rhyming poem though and maybe expand on the darkened streets image[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post SoaringFalcon2010 Posted at 1:05 pm on July 2, 2008 as we walk through the darkened streets, side by side  the tension heats. as we wished we knew what to do, not knowing the other has no clue. why does love have to be like this, why does it have to hurt what happened to bliss? i look in your eyes and see myself, this obssession can not be good for my health. i just wished i could tell you how im feeling, not knowing the same problem your dealing. i feel like a stranger in my own mind, because with you im compleatly blind. why cant we just tell eachother, why hiding it do we even bother? as i look in your eyes i see the tears, and the truth my ears hears. you tell me how much you care, and our lives we shoud share. as i feel the tears in my own eyes, i tell u the story of my lies. and then we walk off hand in hand, together forever we to stand.

Replies DemolitionxXxLover Posted at 1:10 pm on July 2, 2008 I really like it. SoaringFalcon2010 Posted at 1:08 pm on July 2, 2008 Quote: from xsnortingxashesx at 1:06 pm on July 2, 2008 I like your poem, but I couldn't pay attention because we have the same avatar. shoot we do hahaha. carracer Posted at 1:08 pm on July 2, 2008 Its good i think it would be better as a not rhyming poem though and maybe expand on the darkened streets image tenchi1084 Posted at 1:08 pm on July 2, 2008 wonderful, just wonderful.  points to you(if I have any) xsnortingxashesx Posted at 1:06 pm on July 2, 2008 I like your poem, but I couldn't pay attention because we have the same avatar. All 5 previous replies displayed.