Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic My poem to GOD (Please Read) Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]Smorz[/m] at 10:51 am on July 6, 2008[quote]Well aren't you just an individual in your own right.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post bluskypeChris Posted at 10:49 am on July 6, 2008 Poem to GOD God, you everlasting son of a bitch You curse me to a life of damnation You make a mockery of me, and a hypocrite to myself You made me a subject of ridicule, and a scapegoat to society You force your unholy vision upon people You force me to go to your church to satisfies your own selfish need In my time of need, my prayer went unanswered In those years, where I was religious at heart, you only brought agony and suffering There was a time when I worship and kiss at your feet That time has long past, now I only spit at your feet You truly know how to cause chaos in a young person I am a good person, yet you seem to worship the devil I treat everyone with dignity and respect yet I am mistreated all the time You really have your game with people; you're favorite among many I clearly am not your favorite, I am your false creation My friend at Columbine was treated by you the same way I may not have known them, but we share similar experience You are lucky I am smart, and won't do anything stupid as my fellow white friend Last year, you didn't let me die in my accident You gave me life in which I didn't needed, you wanted me to suffer God, you everlasting son of a bitch There are people that deserve happiness in their lives People who don't want to die, that I am willing to give it all up for them I have no use with this life; you have made me ashamed of being me You have driven me to the point that I can't ever be love God, I didn't ask for this life I didn't ask to be a social outcast for much of childhood I didn't ask to be rich or have the greatest life I just wanted to be happy, and you fail me that life For now, I am a constant soul struggling to live life day by day I am an automaton at school and around people You made me fear people, you gave me social anxiety Yet, even with all your power you couldn't stop me from overcoming it Maybe I'm not a normal person but I can sure survive anything you throw at me People say Hitler, Osama , Saddam, Bush is a threat I say the real threat is you GOD, you created these people You praise the spoil rich kids, you praise celebrity, you praise Paris Hilton You despite the homeless, the Handicap, the Jew who are your own people You gave the Devil his own will to burn them into thin air. People say you are a saint, people say you are miracle worker I say this is all a white lie, for I can see past the false mirage You burn people in the past when they disobey you, the proof is in the bible You set up the 10 commandments so that you can hold total control My parents may be fool by you, but I know the truth I can go on and on, but you are dead to me You are my worst enemy, and I don't feel death You can condemn me to hell, because it don't matter As of now, I been walking in hell for 19 years.

Replies iwantcandy Posted at 9:51 pm on July 11, 2008 gahhh! be nice to god! ajmcal Posted at 1:30 pm on July 8, 2008 tbh this is absolutely ridiculous. God doesnt force anyone. If you were forced it was probably by your parents. ajmcal Posted at 1:29 pm on July 8, 2008 tbh this is absolutely ridiculous. hkittyly Posted at 11:12 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from liferocks at 11:02 am on July 6, 2008 i don't know about anyone else, but that just made me laugh ditto sure, i didn't like it because it disrespected what i liked. but i understand how you feel, or at least i used to. but that aside, there was no real form that made it great things didn't lead from one thing into another if you tried to work on it as a poem instead of an anger rant it could have been better. XxemochickxX Posted at 11:06 am on July 6, 2008 i'm nt a bible pusher bt id relel like it wen ppl refer to god as a son of a bitch liferocks Posted at 11:02 am on July 6, 2008 i don't know about anyone else, but that just made me laugh hanie Posted at 11:02 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from bluskypeChris at 10:57 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from hanie at 10:54 am on July 6, 2008 Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy. Some people just don't understand what I go through: Bullying, racism, ridicule, exclusion, unwanted, friendless. Everyone has there own bag of shit in thier lives, in fact if you can find me one person that hasnt had something bad happen to them in the last year i will take it all back. but honestly, will you? If YOUR unhappy, who can change that? YOU! insted of moaning about having no friends, go and make some!! ive been bullied, called names, been exculded. everyone at some point in there life has been through it, so dont tell me that i dont know what your going through, everyone in the world has had there taste of crap. but the difference between you and me is that i deal with it, and make a difference to myself, not moan that im alive, but make a better life for myself!!! and how dare you say that the person that called you Emo shudnt be alive, who the fuck are you to decied if people should live or not. Driftwood Posted at 11:01 am on July 6, 2008 I fucking love it :) lol i don't know why everyone else is dissing it... i think it's fucking awesome!! well fucking done :) x fullmooncurse Posted at 11:01 am on July 6, 2008 It was fine Skip Posted at 10:59 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:58 pm on July 6, 2008 Quote: from Skip at 10:55 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:54 pm on July 6, 2008 Quote: from Skip at 10:50 am on July 6, 2008 way too emo     This is what society has become, stupid ignorant people you have created.     A poem so serious, that people calling me emo.  Who have no clue what I go through my life.  There are people who are hurt throughout the world, how are they EMO?  Does anyone really want to be emo, why would anyone want to feel hurt?  I am not emo, I am hurt and if you live my life you would be too.  God, you let people like this guy or girl to live, and you gave them a life of happiness.  Curse you god, these people should have die already. you have no idea what poetry is do you.  it's not supposed to be emo shite like this.  this could easily be a diary entry instead, and that would just save you from all the humility You call yourself a support leader, yet you do not know a dime about the life of those who are less unfortunate then you are. Look, i am not judging your problems and i am not criticizing your life.  This is the POETRY forum, i am critiquing your POEM, not your PROBLEMS.  Your poem is shit end of story.  Write a diary instead brittonlana Posted at 10:59 am on July 6, 2008 Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy. bluskypeChris Posted at 10:58 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from Skip at 10:55 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:54 pm on July 6, 2008 Quote: from Skip at 10:50 am on July 6, 2008 way too emo    This is what society has become, stupid ignorant people you have created.    A poem so serious, that people calling me emo.  Who have no clue what I go through my life.  There are people who are hurt throughout the world, how are they EMO?  Does anyone really want to be emo, why would anyone want to feel hurt?  I am not emo, I am hurt and if you live my life you would be too.  God, you let people like this guy or girl to live, and you gave them a life of happiness.  Curse you god, these people should have die already. you have no idea what poetry is do you.  it's not supposed to be emo shite like this.  this could easily be a diary entry instead, and that would just save you from all the humility You call yourself a support leader, yet you do not know a dime about the life of those who are less unfortunate then you are. Skip Posted at 10:58 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from bluskypeChris at 1:57 pm on July 6, 2008 Quote: from hanie at 10:54 am on July 6, 2008 Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy. Some people just don't understand what I go through: Bullying, racism, ridicule, exclusion, unwanted, friendless. yea, im pretty sure everyone on this site goes through at least 3 of those every day, youre nothing special bluskypeChris Posted at 10:57 am on July 6, 2008 Quote: from hanie at 10:54 am on July 6, 2008 Maybe if you stopped blaming all your problems on 'God' and started to take resposibilty for your life you wouldnt be so unhappy. Some people just don't understand what I go through: Bullying, racism, ridicule, exclusion, unwanted, friendless. churnfulkiler Posted at 10:56 am on July 6, 2008 put the razor down Most recent 15 of 27 previous replies displayed.