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Topic My Poem: Watch the sun
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PrinceStatus Posted at 12:40 pm on July 12, 2008
i'm not quite finshed with it, but tell me what you think anyway  

Watch the sun
As it beams, can make ice cry
Like sadness
Can bring forth, tears to our eye
We are young
Share our toys, then find them broke
We are old
Give our hearts... already spoke

Watch the snow
As it falls, can cover truth
Like a lie
When spoken, through tongue and tooth

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Human Nature Posted at 12:44 pm on July 12, 2008
Its interesting
HatesYou Posted at 12:43 pm on July 12, 2008
For some reason, every poem i've read on LW is quite depressing.
I wanna make my own poem.
Something like.

Suck my cock.
Suck it hard.
Suck it now.
Let's drink and smoke.

CHYEA.

Joker31 Posted at 12:41 pm on July 12, 2008
That sounds extremely gay.  
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