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LoveAlwaysAndi Posted at 2:29 am on July 31, 2008
Let's play pretend this is not a class
That this place isn't such a pain in the ass
Quite honestly it makes me want to walk on glass
Someday I dare to scream "Kiss My Ass!"
Wish I could forget those classes I chose not to pass
This is high school, who cares?
The good kids that won't put a middle finger in the air??
Let's play pretend today is my day
And tomorrow we'll spend your way
But here and now I call the shots
I have a goal and I'll push through all your road blocks
Time never stops
So, why should we?
Do what it take to be who you chose to be
I refuse here and now to allow you to choose who I'll be
I am who I am and I will be to my end you see
So, let's play pretend the world isn't so sick
Here's a ball
It's your kick
Take the bomb
Light its wick
Now, Lets play pretend one last time
This time love is REAL
Openly, we allow it to display how we truly feel
And suddenly virginity becomes too sacred to steal
Wouldn't that be the most AMAZING bittersweet deal?
Love is degraded
It's now defined by hatred
It's all superficial you see
I want to be loved for the passion burning deep inside of me
Could you be the one to set that love free?
Let's play pretend that this isn't reality!

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lazy butterfly Posted at 2:48 pm on July 31, 2008
I really like this - great stuff!
MindArtist Posted at 1:25 pm on July 31, 2008
That was fucking amazing!!
cakewhippedtopping Posted at 2:56 am on July 31, 2008
Quote: from LoveAlwaysAndi at 2:54 am on July 31, 2008

Quote: from cakewhippedtopping at 5:49 am on July 31, 2008

Wow this is one of the best poems I've read in a long time!(= You have a lot of talent

Wow that was such a sweet reply!!!! Thank you sooo very much

Your welcome

LoveAlwaysAndi Posted at 2:54 am on July 31, 2008
Quote: from cakewhippedtopping at 5:49 am on July 31, 2008

Wow this is one of the best poems I've read in a long time!(= You have a lot of talent

Wow that was such a sweet reply!!!! Thank you sooo very much
cakewhippedtopping Posted at 2:49 am on July 31, 2008
Wow this is one of the best poems I've read in a long time!(= You have a lot of talent
LoveAlwaysAndi Posted at 2:45 am on July 31, 2008
Quote: from xlovexmex at 5:42 am on July 31, 2008

Wow. I wish I could write like that.
I am envious.


anyone can you just need inspiration
xlovexmex Posted at 2:42 am on July 31, 2008
Wow. I wish I could write like that.
I am envious.
LoveAlwaysAndi Posted at 2:40 am on July 31, 2008
Quote: from LightThisCity at 5:30 am on July 31, 2008

lets play doctor

HAHAHAH not funny
LoveAlwaysAndi Posted at 2:33 am on July 31, 2008
Quote: from latin muscle at 5:32 am on July 31, 2008

Quote: from LoveAlwaysAndi at 2:31 am on July 31, 2008

nahhh i wrote it a while ago for school and my friends really liked it so i posted it

Pretty impressive.
I liked it.


Awwww thank you
Latin Muscle Posted at 2:32 am on July 31, 2008
Quote: from LoveAlwaysAndi at 2:31 am on July 31, 2008

nahhh i wrote it a while ago for school and my friends really liked it so i posted it

Pretty impressive.
I liked it.
LoveAlwaysAndi Posted at 2:31 am on July 31, 2008
nahhh i wrote it a while ago for school and my friends really liked it so i posted it
Latin Muscle Posted at 2:30 am on July 31, 2008
ROFL
are you sad?
LightThisCity Posted at 2:30 am on July 31, 2008
lets play doctor
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