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rawr41507 Posted at 7:02 am on July 31, 2008
which one do you think is  better? & why/what do you like about it??

Chris, darlin
I havent seen your face in forever
It kills me
And I haven't heard your amazing voice in so long
I miss it like crazy
And what I really miss
October first
Everything was a huge disaster
But as I was crying
And the world went up in flames around us
Things were so perfect.
Perfect cause I was with you.
It was the perfect disaster.

-or-

I love you babe
I really do
But this distance is terrible
I miss you
and this pain is almost unbearable
But I deal with it
because you mean the world to me
And I'll admit
I'm afraid I'll never see
you ever again
And that is what keeps me up so late
every night.
I'll love you forever darling.

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Mattie17 Posted at 7:15 am on July 31, 2008
Like both. but i voted second
paperskyx Posted at 7:14 am on July 31, 2008
First....
Four King Ace Posted at 7:14 am on July 31, 2008
I prefer the second one
albinna Posted at 7:11 am on July 31, 2008
i like the first one.
SophFairy Posted at 7:06 am on July 31, 2008
First.
Tigerhawk Posted at 7:05 am on July 31, 2008
First one is better...
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