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Anonymous Posted at 10:43 pm on Aug. 3, 2008
As we talked today I found I broke your heart
In such away it tore me apart
I stole your soul and now it's into
Hurry up we need glue
I can't change the past
I won't even try
As I lay here and write you thought make me cry
I know you hurt but don't say bye
Help me change push me to reach for the sky
Love from you is enough to make me high
These feelings make me think I can fly
Thanks to you I don't want to die
As the day go by I'll continue to try
A day with you as friend is leaving a love sick puppy to die

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Anonymous Posted at 10:51 pm on Aug. 3, 2008
its supposed to be corny!!! i dont want it to be TOOO corny tho
JamesBrauman Posted at 10:48 pm on Aug. 3, 2008
It wouldnt be so corny if all the lines didn't rhyme.
loner asian Posted at 10:45 pm on Aug. 3, 2008
very very corny
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