LiveWire Network Peer Answers Peer Support Teen Forums Tech Forums College Forums 350 users online 225242 members 454 active today Advertise Here Sign In
TeenCollegeTechPhotos | Quizzes | LiveSecret | Memberlist | Dictionary | News | FAQ
Member Spotlight
afmc011
Movies: Life as a House.
Mood: Excited
You have 1 new message.
Emergency Help
Until you sign up you can't do much. Yes, it's free.

Sign Up Now
Membername:
Password:
Already have an account?
Invite Friends
Active Members
Groups
Contests
Moderators
2 online / 25 MPM
Christmas!
Fresh Topics
  LiveWire / Teen Forums / Short Stories & Poetry / Adding Reply

Quoting Post
Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum.
Topic The Player
Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds)
Password   Forgotten your password?
Post

Font:   Size:   Color:

FAQ Keyword Search:
Post Options
Favorites Manager
Notify me of new replies to this topic by email
Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message
Original Post
randomrocks Posted at 11:02 am on Aug. 17, 2008
He'll meet you and sweep you off your feet
He's nice and he's funny, so cute and so sweet
Suprisingly, he likes the same things as you
He does all the things that you love to do
He's the perfect guy, the one of your dreams
You belong together, or so it seems!
He looks in your eyes, and plays with your hair
He tells you that he will always be there.
His touch is so soft, his hold is so tight,
His words are so soothing, his kiss is just right!
You ditch all you friends for your new obsession
You don't realize your future is full of depression
You think that you love him, you give him your heart
Little do you know he will tear it apart
You do what he wants, you know it's not good
You told him to slow down, and you think he understood
You let it slide by, he's just having fun
You'll learn to like it as time goes on!
He's taken your heart, and locked it away
And you see him with a different girl the next day
You cry and you grieve, but then you forgive,
He won't do it again for as long as he lives!
At this point you've fallen into his trap
He has all control when you're in his lap
You believe hes sorry, you're together again
You give a chance, he's your only friend!
You're right where he wants you, he molds you like clay,
And you see him with girl number three the very next day
He got what he wanted , accomplished his goal
He still has your heart, which he evilly stole!
He's taken your purity, you still can't believe
You fell hurt and cheap and extremely naive.
If only your hair was blonde and straight
If only you looked like you lost some weight
If only your clothes were a little bit tighter
If only your teeeth were alittle bit whiter
You know he's a jerk, but you still want him back
And you grieve about all those qualities you lack
All you wanted was to have some fun
Now you wish this whole thing had never begun
You wish that one day you'll see him cry
That one day he'll know how he killed you inside!
But you know that he won't, cause he's numb to pain
He will be with some girl while you cry and complain
Beware of the player, they'll steal your heart
And the'll give it back once it's all torn apart
Don't let them suck into their game
Cause you once you lose, you're never the same!

Replies
Alex lee Posted at 11:23 am on Aug. 17, 2008
I know how you feel
Corrupted Innocence Posted at 11:08 am on Aug. 17, 2008
I think this, it's pretty awesome and it sounds so true. I'm guessing personal experiance has soemthing to do with the fact you wrote it.
its only me Posted at 11:06 am on Aug. 17, 2008
thats really really good - i love it
GHH Posted at 11:06 am on Aug. 17, 2008
How touching.
All 4 previous replies displayed.