Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic what do u think of this poem? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]mackenzie13[/m] at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008[quote]i wrote this when i was 12.. it seems so cliche to write about tears, but it's what i feel, what i fear they pour down my face just like a river, they give me goosebumps make me shiver even though it's over, i still wish there could be us feel all that care all that trust i keep hoping it will be you when i pick up the phone but the deed is done, the seed has been sown all that i wrote in this poem is true, even this last line: i love you[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post mackenzie13 Posted at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 i wrote this when i was 12.. it seems so cliche to write about tears, but it's what i feel, what i fear they pour down my face just like a river, they give me goosebumps make me shiver even though it's over, i still wish there could be us feel all that care all that trust i keep hoping it will be you when i pick up the phone but the deed is done, the seed has been sown all that i wrote in this poem is true, even this last line: i love you

Replies Velico112 Posted at 8:39 am on Aug. 19, 2008 excellent dragonking Posted at 8:30 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 It's good for a 12 year old to have wrote. jamesshadowwolf Posted at 8:20 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 he im a guy and for a 12 year old that was pritty good.  dont lisen to the others puttign you down. they probly just people who think ohh its a poem... Lihiro Posted at 8:19 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 Lameish. But don't we all hate poems we wrote when we were 12? I CRINGE at mine. hI jAMES Posted at 8:19 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 Its decent. HXC Posted at 8:18 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 lame. hooray for rootbeer Posted at 8:18 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 i hate it. acausedelle Posted at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 It seems too mundane. ashleyacid Posted at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 I hate it. All 9 previous replies displayed.