Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic k, so im stuck. Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]tennisplayerV2[/m] at 1:06 pm on Aug. 19, 2008[quote]what is this even about might help[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post iwantcandy Posted at 1:05 pm on Aug. 19, 2008 this is what i have so far. You didn't have to say anything, your eyes said it all. Nothing can make it leave, since the day i made that call. The smallest thing can change you..... k yeah, Something is missing. It just isn't right. Thoughts? Ideas?

Replies verl mcverl Posted at 1:07 pm on Aug. 19, 2008 try and make your rhyming lines have the same amount of syllables, that might help mudonthetires14 Posted at 1:06 pm on Aug. 19, 2008 it needs another line.. i dk what though. i suck at this stuff. xBeautifulTragedyx Posted at 1:06 pm on Aug. 19, 2008 It's fine to me. tennisplayerV2 Posted at 1:06 pm on Aug. 19, 2008 what is this even about might help All 4 previous replies displayed.