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iwantcandy Posted at 1:13 pm on Aug. 19, 2008

Now he has me thinking,
about the first time our eyes met.
and how the hours went by like minutes,
but the shadows never left.
now i start to realize..
that those shadows will always stay.
and as long as i still love you,
they will never go away.

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Eos Posted at 1:15 pm on Aug. 19, 2008
i liked it.
Deep man, deep.
SpM Posted at 1:14 pm on Aug. 19, 2008
I didn't love it, but it wasn't half bad.
its only me Posted at 1:14 pm on Aug. 19, 2008
awwww thats really good and well written. i write a lot too
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