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Anonymous Posted at 3:26 pm on Aug. 19, 2008

thanks to chaosdisown.
most of the ideas here are theres, i just re-aranged the words a bit.

When i called you that night,
i said far too much.
and the moment you left,
was the beginging of the end.
My time still wouldnt shorten for you,
and it will never again.
You were as cold as steel,
but i've seen you change like the seasons.


idk if im done or what?

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LittleItaly Posted at 11:49 am on Aug. 20, 2008
could use work