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Quote: from [m]iBritt[/m] at 5:39 pm on Aug. 20, 2008[quote] I'm writing a short story, and I don't really know what direction it's in, but would someone be willing to read it, and tell me what you think of it so far? The part that I've written - it's not the beginning, it's going to be somewhere in the middle. Any takers? I would really appreciate it.[/quote]
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iBritt
Posted at 5:39 pm on Aug. 20, 2008
I'm writing a short story, and I don't really know what direction it's in, but would someone be willing to read it, and tell me what you think of it so far? The part that I've written - it's not the beginning, it's going to be somewhere in the middle.
Any takers? I would really appreciate it.
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ErnestoTheTrippyOne
Posted at 5:46 pm on Aug. 20, 2008
Hell yeah, I love reading unfinished crap and helping with it! (not sarcasm)
Fouad
Posted at 5:42 pm on Aug. 20, 2008
yeah why not
xemoxisxlovesxcryx
Posted at 5:39 pm on Aug. 20, 2008
i will if you want
im a beta on fanfiction
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