My life is nothing but a path
That leads to all we know
My love is like a portal
To what my spirit shows,

A body is a chapter
In a spirits life,
A lump of earth,
We call our own,
For walking upon such wonder,

Our minds are but sweet music,
Simple and pretty to those who feel,
A vision of trickery,
Learnt from those of old
To give us some to mean.

I think its the last para that's the problem. Any ideas?