Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic You Can Count On Me Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]ocdbabe[/m] at 9:56 pm on Sep. 4, 2008[quote]I changed it a bit... I count the hours and the days I count the minutes, count the ways. I count until there is no more Continue counting, A silly chore. When he says he loves me so, I count the lies that I do know. But in all truth I love him back Truth be forgotten, for truth I lack. (Should it be 'a silly chore' or 'a pointless chore' or 'a lackluster chore' or should I say 'my' instead of 'a'?) [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post ocdbabe Posted at 9:56 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 I changed it a bit... I count the hours and the days I count the minutes, count the ways. I count until there is no more Continue counting, A silly chore. When he says he loves me so, I count the lies that I do know. But in all truth I love him back Truth be forgotten, for truth I lack. (Should it be 'a silly chore' or 'a pointless chore' or 'a lackluster chore' or should I say 'my' instead of 'a'?)

Replies ocdbabe Posted at 10:04 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 Quote: from TBMP at 10:01 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 I count the hours and the days I count the minutes, the shades of grey. I count until there is no more Continue counting, my worthless chore. When he says he loves me so, the truth is shown as lies i know. though in all truth I love him back but Truth's a contradiction, that's not intact     jus my take on it, take what u want leave what u dont ^_^ Yeah, I'm not changing the whole thing. It actually has meaning to it. 'Shades of grey' doesn't convey that meaning all that well. californication Posted at 10:01 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 Not bad, but I'mt not good at poems so I can't help you TBMP Posted at 10:01 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 I count the hours and the days I count the minutes, the shades of grey. I count until there is no more Continue counting, my worthless chore. When he says he loves me so, the truth is shown as lies i know. though in all truth I love him back but Truth's a contradiction, that's not intact jus my take on it, take what u want leave what u dont ^_^ All 3 previous replies displayed.