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anonimous Posted at 4:48 pm on Sep. 10, 2008

I have this much.

I open my eyes
to a blur of white.
I am gentley awakened,
by the feel of a light morning breeze against my face.
As i peer out the window,
I notice the fluffly clouds floating overhead.
and i remember the magic moment
that i determindly recall
through the most unhappy times.
Wildly,
and ecstaticly
I awak again to the blur of white.
To find that........


Idk..
help?

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hI jAMES Posted at 1:47 pm on Sep. 11, 2008
Its good as it is.