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Anonymous Posted at 6:07 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Hey, I'm the one who was posting a few days ago, about being given an opportunity by Harlequin to write an erotica for them. I am 16 years old.

I was really uncertain about whether I was going to do it or  not, but I have decide to start writing it at least.

So, let me run this idea by you. You don't have to read romance, but just work with me here.

It's a Fantasy Romance, and one of the characters has the power to read/control minds.

So, in one of the sex scenes, he literally gives the girl an orgasm, just with his mind. But of course, they do other things too.

So, hot or not? (And of course, it will depend on how well I write it)

But assuming I write it well.

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TheAntiBarbie Posted at 7:40 am on Sep. 14, 2008
It might be. It depends on how it's written.
Anonymous Posted at 6:42 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Quote: from scott sm at 6:35 am on Sep. 14, 2008

copying off the movie what women want starring mel gibson so not hot

I've never seen that movie before.

Natsy Posted at 6:39 am on Sep. 14, 2008
depends on HOW you write it. make it good! lol xx
scott sm Posted at 6:35 am on Sep. 14, 2008
copying off the movie what women want starring mel gibson so not hot
XxsafetypinsxX Posted at 6:32 am on Sep. 14, 2008
depends on writing ability.
pm me.
18SoulReaper18 Posted at 6:26 am on Sep. 14, 2008
sounds cool to me. pm me about more details
The Dark Prince Posted at 6:23 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Sorry but that is just not hot. It is too sci-fi ish.
liveone555 Posted at 6:20 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Show it 2 me after pm maybe??
Kitty Kiska Posted at 6:18 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Writing ability...i could see that working out good tho
mikeyp123 Posted at 6:14 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Depending on writing ability, hook me up!
alastrxxna Posted at 6:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Possibly hot.
ijustdontknow Posted at 6:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
It is a possibility to be hot. Like you said, it depends on how well it is written.
venomromance Posted at 6:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Not hot.
GoodFairy13 Posted at 6:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
I'd read it.
It very much depends on the quality of your writing.
Sounds good.
XX8BALLXX Posted at 6:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
funny and mayb slighty hot but it aint nt hot

xx

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