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Anonymous Posted at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Well, nevermind guys. Apparently, it sucks.

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St Jimmy Posted at 7:20 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Blah. I couldn't read it because you had CHANGED it
guitar lover Posted at 7:18 am on Sep. 14, 2008
don't give up now its good but you just need some few fix ups. don't give up :( pm me if you want some help i know i could help you
K r e s c e n d o Posted at 7:17 am on Sep. 14, 2008
It's okay [:
guitar lover Posted at 7:14 am on Sep. 14, 2008
still say there names and everything just not all the time like look at a book and see how much they say he or she cause i know they don't say the name all the time. but then don't use he she all the time you know?
SpM Posted at 7:13 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Haha, "drinking in his six ridges"? Your word choice is bizarre and your writing is just awkward to read. No flow.
RIMHfire Posted at 7:12 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Stryker is a stupid name.
Anonymous Posted at 7:11 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Quote: from guitar lover at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008

first and for most before i read any ferther TOO MUCH Stryker this alexa this stryker this alexa this

Alright. I can change that. What should I say instead? "He? She?"

alastrxxna Posted at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Hot.
guitar lover Posted at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008
first and for most before i read any ferther TOO MUCH Stryker this alexa this stryker this alexa this
Anonymous Posted at 7:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Quote: from The Fantasy at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008

Stryker is an odd name.

True.

That's not the point though, lol. Everything is subject to change at this point.

I just need to know whether or not I did well with the scene.

Permious Posted at 7:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008
"then you shall have me"

i stopped reading after that. jesus fucking christ

The Fantasy Posted at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008
Stryker is an odd name.
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