Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic is this poem good? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]cadetjones2011[/m] at 10:41 am on Sep. 20, 2008[quote]Quote: from [m]xXxRiotxXx[/m] at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008[quote]Cold fear I know that your here Don't lie to me What the fuck did you think? That I would forgive you? Be your best friend? Just go away And let this shit end That's the last poem I wrote.   And yes, I like yours. [/quote]thanks and your poem is good to[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post cadetjones2011 Posted at 10:37 am on Sep. 20, 2008 ok so I wrote this poem for  me and my boyfriend "Far Away" We may live far away But we know that our love will always stay You have stolen my heart And it kills me the whole time we are apart But just knowing how much you love me You have set my soul free Everyday I feel your pain And I know it's the worst kind of stain But just know that you will always be a part of me So can't you see All I ever needed was you I know you are true And will never turn my world to blue I am so glad you are in my life And one day we shall become husband and wife And when that special day comes our hearts will finally intertwine By:Jessica Jones

Replies cadetjones2011 Posted at 4:40 am on Sep. 27, 2008 Quote: from breannafhchick06 at 10:52 am on Sep. 20, 2008 very nice thanks cadetjones2011 Posted at 3:59 pm on Sep. 20, 2008 Quote: from KathyN at 2:47 pm on Sep. 20, 2008 Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them. thanks KathyN Posted at 2:47 pm on Sep. 20, 2008 Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them. cadetjones2011 Posted at 1:04 pm on Sep. 20, 2008 Quote: from sadnessness at 10:56 am on Sep. 20, 2008 yeah its nice actually thanks sadnessness Posted at 10:56 am on Sep. 20, 2008 yeah its nice actually breannafhchick06 Posted at 10:52 am on Sep. 20, 2008 very nice cadetjones2011 Posted at 10:41 am on Sep. 20, 2008 Quote: from xXxRiotxXx at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008 Cold fear I know that your here Don't lie to me What the fuck did you think? That I would forgive you? Be your best friend? Just go away And let this shit end That's the last poem I wrote.   And yes, I like yours. thanks and your poem is good to cadetjones2011 Posted at 10:41 am on Sep. 20, 2008 Quote: from HangEmHigh at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008 Awww that's really sweet =) thanks HangEmHigh Posted at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008 Awww that's really sweet =) xXxRiotxXx Posted at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008 Cold fear I know that your here Don't lie to me What the fuck did you think? That I would forgive you? Be your best friend? Just go away And let this shit end That's the last poem I wrote. And yes, I like yours. All 10 previous replies displayed.