Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic lame poem Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]nikki123[/m] at 11:20 am on Sep. 27, 2008[quote]not bad. would be a bit longer though and have a bit more detail but its alright. mediocre. keep trying.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Hey Jewlee Posted at 11:02 am on Sep. 27, 2008 They turn and begin to walk away from each other her to the metro station him to the cafe where he works past the drunks clutching bottles past the chic stores past the boarded up buildings past the place where they first met she starts down the stairs he goes through the door into the train behind the counter gone. thoughts?

Replies nikki123 Posted at 11:20 am on Sep. 27, 2008 not bad. would be a bit longer though and have a bit more detail but its alright. mediocre. keep trying. Louisianaaa X3 Posted at 11:16 am on Sep. 27, 2008 awe i like it verryy much good job.. cept its mushy.. carracer Posted at 11:05 am on Sep. 27, 2008 You said it yourself. Its a lame poem. sosupkthnx Posted at 11:04 am on Sep. 27, 2008 What the fuck is this? All 4 previous replies displayed.