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evann92 Posted at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008
As his vioce deepends,
The pain only gets worse.
More powerful than ever.
He slaps her to the ground.
Only caring about himself.
Scenceless.
As she screams,
'Mercy please don't do this!'
He rapes her repeatedly.
She's left on the ground.
Empty of herself.
Alone.
He's taken everything but her heart.
The only thing that will carry her through the cold nights wind.

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punkypanda Posted at 8:15 am on Oct. 1, 2008
good but its 'senseless'
stiicky iicky Posted at 8:14 am on Oct. 1, 2008
Quote: from dont notice me at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008

sucks.
this.
Dont Notice Me Posted at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008
sucks.
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