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Topic I think Eternity just spit in your direction.
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Anonymous Posted at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008
For every time forever is said
Eternity spits and swallows.

When forever becomes for heaven
The whispers that reside in screams
Place trust in dreams of halos.

I now see that the ground I step on
Is merely a mat of particles that I will one day fall through.
I realize the sky is just a reflection of light,
I realize that every time I say "my god",
I am refering to an image I've created,
To explain my existence.

You can only exist
If you believe you exist
And if so
You're just breathing...

I lost my breath a long time ago,

And in doing so
I fell down through the gaps between
Protons and electrons,
Because I've always been neutral

And now I'm like the feather
That floats away
On a breeze
That will carry on forever.


And Eternity?
She just swallowed her tongue.

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Lulamae Posted at 10:19 am on Oct. 7, 2008
Eternity...she just swallowed your tongue.

Genius.

Anonymous Posted at 4:41 pm on Oct. 6, 2008
Eterntiy isn't a whore.
chaosdisown Posted at 11:57 am on Oct. 6, 2008
Quote: from BleedingSteelWings at 11:56 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from chaosdisown at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Eternity spits and swallows.  
 

 
 is Eternity a whore...?


If Eternity is Fortune, then yes she is. even Hamlet says.

does Eternity really need to be Fortune to be a whore?
BleedingSteelWings Posted at 11:56 am on Oct. 6, 2008
Quote: from chaosdisown at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Eternity spits and swallows.  

 
is Eternity a whore...?


If Eternity is Fortune, then yes she is. even Hamlet says.
Dont Notice Me Posted at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008
hot.
chaosdisown Posted at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008
Quote: from Anonymous at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Eternity spits and swallows.


is Eternity a whore...?
xshaix Posted at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008
Genius. Wow.
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