Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic A start 4 my new story opinions needed Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]belizabeth[/m] at 9:11 am on Oct. 7, 2008[quote]The Transition It was about 4 years ago that I moved here to Tennessee. The transition into this new life was not easy.  At first I rebelled and told my parents I hated it here and I wanted to go back to North Carolina where I used to live. Then after about half a year I started to realize, what's the use to rebel when my parents were and are set on staying here in TN. But let's back up a little. My parents decided to move here on one horrific vacation to Ohio. We went to Ohio to go to Cedar point and while we were there we decided to visit my Aunt and uncle. When we went to see my Aunt and uncle my parents asked about my grandma in TN. That's when they decided that when we headed home we would stop by and see her. Well let me put it this way that vacation was not the best one we've been on. So okay on the way home we stopped off in TN and went to where my grandma lived. [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post belizabeth Posted at 9:11 am on Oct. 7, 2008 The Transition It was about 4 years ago that I moved here to Tennessee. The transition into this new life was not easy.  At first I rebelled and told my parents I hated it here and I wanted to go back to North Carolina where I used to live. Then after about half a year I started to realize, what's the use to rebel when my parents were and are set on staying here in TN. But let's back up a little. My parents decided to move here on one horrific vacation to Ohio. We went to Ohio to go to Cedar point and while we were there we decided to visit my Aunt and uncle. When we went to see my Aunt and uncle my parents asked about my grandma in TN. That's when they decided that when we headed home we would stop by and see her. Well let me put it this way that vacation was not the best one we've been on. So okay on the way home we stopped off in TN and went to where my grandma lived.

Replies belizabeth Posted at 9:18 am on Oct. 7, 2008 okay thanks. ElephantStone Posted at 9:16 am on Oct. 7, 2008 thats well written. Well structured. Kinda reminds me of the narrative in fight club. belizabeth Posted at 9:14 am on Oct. 7, 2008 okay.... Corey Lynn Posted at 9:14 am on Oct. 7, 2008 that has got to suck im sorry All 4 previous replies displayed.